I am an ugly looking big creature. An out-of-the-box-wisdom preacher. Usually Kool and unusually weird. Full of 'spirit' and never tired.

Wednesday, July 13, 2005

Miscarriage

A kiss of
An early monsoon
Sweeping away millions of hopes
Shattering long nurtured dreams
An early death
A last kiss

posted by intelligent_bacteria at 1:17 AM

6 Comments:

Blogger Lalitha said...

small and well written :-)

4:51 AM

 
Blogger Unknown said...

Ufff...tera aisa bhi hota hai kya...

4:59 AM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Tinu ???
nice arrangement of words :-)

-prince

12:16 AM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautiful piece of work......has got the depth of the million oceans and silence of the thousand skies!!....a fulfilled desire...an unfulfilled hope,dream..

7:29 AM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Very touching. It carries all the weight of great sorrow in its few lines

1:19 AM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I wonder the way you expressed
the pain in 6 lines. Its really a piece of work.

- Lonely Stranger (Kolkata)

2:17 AM

 

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